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A Person I Admire

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My Angel

In this article, I will describe a person who I admire, someone who has become the angel of my life. A person who has made me like now.  Yup, my beloved mother. If many say his mother was good at everything, but my mother is very unusual. And come from ordinary families. Yeah let me tell you who is my mother.

My mother school up to primary school. She likes to help her mother or my grandmother when she was younger. My mother was friendly and polite person. And I liked most of my mother is her humility, love forgive and be patient. My mother did not like to prolong the problem and prefer to live in peace. She would bend over backwards for the happiness of her children. She also does not like to gossip like other mothers. Although she knew, but did not want to indulge.

My mother is not a protective towards her children. She gives freedom. She gives full confidence. Only, she'll call when we come home late around six o'clock in the evening. And we will always be mindful to tell her  that we come home late or stay at home friends.

 My mother has innocent eyes. Eyebrows and lips are thin, and also has teeth like a rabbit. She has white skin and a mole above the eyebrow. He also was not too fat and skinny. Not too high and short.

My mother is still beautiful because married at a young age about seventeen years. My mother was among those who succeed because it has to send her six children to college. And two of them are already working. Yeah not easy actually, plus the distance between our age too close. She realized that the school cannot be said cheap, so she worked hard for us. However we include the children good. We are maintaining our relationships with opposite sex. Considering many of us are women. While many other mothers warned their daughters overwhelmed. Actually mother rarely give advice or words of wisdom. Although sometimes I want it. Although sometimes I wish my mom nag or tell remembering her past. Yeah she is innocent. My mother does not understand technology including. Although she does not understand, she still has a lot of experience compared to his children. My mom also does not like to feel pain even though he was sick. He did not want to worry about a lot of people. And we realized that we had to maintain his health.

Yeah, that's all of about my mother. Someone who is innocent, and hardworking. Someone who has become an angel in my life.

More Analysis
Topic Sentence	In this article, I will describe a person who I admire, someone who has become the angel of my life
Supporting Sentence 1	My mother school up to primary school. She likes to help her mother or my grandmother when she was younger
Supporting Sentence 2	My mother is not a protective towards her children,…. .
Supporting Sentence 3	My mother has innocent eyes. Eyebrows and lips are thin, and also has teeth like a rabbit,…. .
Supporting Sentence 4	My mother is still beautiful because married at a young age about seventeen years,..
Conclusion	Yeah, that's all of about my mother. Someone who is innocent, and hardworking. Someone who has become an angel in my life.

Note : In descriptive text you may describing  from physically or characters person.

Analysis of Generic Structure
Introduction	In this article, I will describe a person who I admire, someone who has become the angel of my life. A person who has made me like now.  Yup, my beloved mother. If many say his mother was good at everything, but my mother is very unusual. And come from ordinary families. Yeah let me tell you who is my mother,…. .
Description	My mother has innocent eyes. Eyebrows and lips are thin, and also has teeth like a rabbit. She has white skin and a mole above the eyebrow. He also was not too fat and skinny. Not too high and short,… .