Task 8

Explanation Text

Why teens smoke cigarettes

Nowadays it would be unheard of for people not to smoke. Smoking is a part of everyday life, although, believe it or not, it has only recently become so.
There are over one thousand million smokers throughout the world, which is an astonishing number, considering the harm smoking does to your body, which we are all well aware of.
It has only recently been proved that smoking causes lung cancer amongst other serious diseases and that passive smoking is also harmful for those that do not smoke.

           Cigarettes are widely available and in many countries fairly inexpensive to buy. For this reason, buying cigarettes is no longer a luxury only for those who can afford to buy them, but a product that is widely attainable by most people. There are not many smokers about who started smoking after the age of eighteen. In fact, the majority of smokers took up the habit in their early or mid teens.  At such a young age, you don't really think about the health risks of smoking and you certainly do not realize how addictive smoking can be. As a teenager you probably think that you can try smoking a few times and then take it or leave it.

               However, the reality is that it doesn't take long to become addicted to nicotine and smoking. Within a short period of time, children can experience the same cravings and withdrawal symptoms as an adult, as well as smoke as many cigarettes or more.

               There are several reasons as to why children or teenagers start smoking.
Peer pressure plays an important part. Many children start smoking because their friends have tried it or smoke themselves. Those children may have started as they have grown up in an environment where their parents, grandparents and older siblings smoke, and so they smoke in order to look and act like them. Other children start smoking as an act of rebellion or defiance against their parents or people of authority. Some children may also begin to smoke if they have low self-esteem. Smoking may get them in with the "in crowd" and help them to make friends. If they smoke, then they will be accepted by their peers. Some children have said that they smoke to appear older and more grown up, especially if they are surrounded by young adults who smoke.

              A number of children are only experimenting with smoking and just want to try it so see what all the fuss is about. As it is prohibited to smoke until the age of sixteen or even eighteen in some countries, children who smoke and get away with it without being caught, can get a thrill or feeling of excitement out of flaunting the law and doing what grown up adults do all the time.

               Whatever the reason that a teenager has for starting to smoke, it is apparent that no matter how much you try to tell them that smoking is bad for you, a great number of them are going to try it anyway.  At that age, a teenager is more likely to be influenced by what their friends are doing rather than doing what their parents would like them to do.  Some teenagers may take up smoking because their favorite film star or pop star smokes. They may think that if they smoke just like their favorite idol does, then they will appear more glamorous, attractive or sexy, like them.   As with the younger generation, smoking may be a way of talking to different people and making new friends. Asking someone for a light or a cigarette may be a way of starting a conversation or an ice breaker.

              Finally, some people smoke if they are bored and have nothing to do or if they are feeling lonely. Trying to keep busy would perhaps be a more satisfactory solution to this problem.

More Analysis
Topic Sentence	Nowadays it would be unheard of for people not to smoke
Supporting Sentence 1	Cigarettes are widely available and in many countries fairly inexpensive to buy.
Supporting Sentence 2	However, the reality is that it doesn't take long to become addicted to nicotine and smoking.
Supporting Sentence 3	There are several reasons as to why children or teenagers start smoking
Suppporting Sentence 4	A number of children are only experimenting with smoking and just want to try it so see what all the fuss is about
Supporting Sentence 5	Whatever the reason that a teenager has for starting to smoke, it is apparent that no matter how much you try to tell them that smoking is bad for you, a great number of them are going to try it anyway.
Conclusion	Finally, some people smoke if they are bored and have nothing to do or if they are feeling lonely. Trying to keep busy would perhaps be a more satisfactory solution to this problem.

Analysis of Generic Structure
General statement	Nowadays it would be unheard of for people not to smoke. Smoking is a part of everyday life, although, believe it or not, it has only recently become so. There are over one thousand million smokers throughout the world, which is an astonishing number, considering the harm smoking does to your body, which we are all well aware of.
A squenced of explanation	Cigarettes are widely available and in many countries fairly inexpensive to buy. For this reason, buying cigarettes is no longer a luxury only for those who can afford to buy them, but a product that is widely attainable by most people,…. .
Closing	Finally, some people smoke if they are bored and have nothing to do or if they are feeling lonely. Trying to keep busy would perhaps be a more satisfactory solution to this problem.

Taks 7

A Person I Admire

Descriptive Text

My Angel

In this article, I will describe a person who I admire, someone who has become the angel of my life. A person who has made me like now.  Yup, my beloved mother. If many say his mother was good at everything, but my mother is very unusual. And come from ordinary families. Yeah let me tell you who is my mother.

My mother school up to primary school. She likes to help her mother or my grandmother when she was younger. My mother was friendly and polite person. And I liked most of my mother is her humility, love forgive and be patient. My mother did not like to prolong the problem and prefer to live in peace. She would bend over backwards for the happiness of her children. She also does not like to gossip like other mothers. Although she knew, but did not want to indulge.

My mother is not a protective towards her children. She gives freedom. She gives full confidence. Only, she'll call when we come home late around six o'clock in the evening. And we will always be mindful to tell her  that we come home late or stay at home friends.

 My mother has innocent eyes. Eyebrows and lips are thin, and also has teeth like a rabbit. She has white skin and a mole above the eyebrow. He also was not too fat and skinny. Not too high and short.

My mother is still beautiful because married at a young age about seventeen years. My mother was among those who succeed because it has to send her six children to college. And two of them are already working. Yeah not easy actually, plus the distance between our age too close. She realized that the school cannot be said cheap, so she worked hard for us. However we include the children good. We are maintaining our relationships with opposite sex. Considering many of us are women. While many other mothers warned their daughters overwhelmed. Actually mother rarely give advice or words of wisdom. Although sometimes I want it. Although sometimes I wish my mom nag or tell remembering her past. Yeah she is innocent. My mother does not understand technology including. Although she does not understand, she still has a lot of experience compared to his children. My mom also does not like to feel pain even though he was sick. He did not want to worry about a lot of people. And we realized that we had to maintain his health.

Yeah, that's all of about my mother. Someone who is innocent, and hardworking. Someone who has become an angel in my life.

More Analysis
Topic Sentence	In this article, I will describe a person who I admire, someone who has become the angel of my life
Supporting Sentence 1	My mother school up to primary school. She likes to help her mother or my grandmother when she was younger
Supporting Sentence 2	My mother is not a protective towards her children,…. .
Supporting Sentence 3	My mother has innocent eyes. Eyebrows and lips are thin, and also has teeth like a rabbit,…. .
Supporting Sentence 4	My mother is still beautiful because married at a young age about seventeen years,..
Conclusion	Yeah, that's all of about my mother. Someone who is innocent, and hardworking. Someone who has become an angel in my life.

Note : In descriptive text you may describing  from physically or characters person.

Analysis of Generic Structure
Introduction	In this article, I will describe a person who I admire, someone who has become the angel of my life. A person who has made me like now.  Yup, my beloved mother. If many say his mother was good at everything, but my mother is very unusual. And come from ordinary families. Yeah let me tell you who is my mother,…. .
Description	My mother has innocent eyes. Eyebrows and lips are thin, and also has teeth like a rabbit. She has white skin and a mole above the eyebrow. He also was not too fat and skinny. Not too high and short,… .